How to Write Ad Copy That Doesn't Sound Like Every Other DTC Brand
Open ten random DTC ads and you'll see the same handful of phrases rotate through nearly all of them: "elevate your routine," "game-changing," "you deserve this." None of it is wrong exactly, it's just been said so often it no longer means anything to the person reading it. Here's how to write copy that actually sounds like your brand instead.
Get specific instead of aspirational
"Elevate your skincare routine" describes nothing. "Clears redness in 2 weeks, no fragrance, no alcohol" describes an actual outcome. Specificity does the persuading that vague aspiration can't, because a reader can picture a specific claim and can't picture a vague one.
Write like you'd talk to one person
The copy that cuts through doesn't read like a brand announcement, it reads like a person explaining something to a friend. "This is the only sunscreen that doesn't leave a white cast on darker skin" sounds like a real recommendation. "Introducing our revolutionary new formula" sounds like a press release nobody asked for.
Lead with the objection, not the feature
Most categories have a well-known reason people hesitate: supplements feel gimmicky, skincare claims feel exaggerated, subscription boxes feel like a hassle to cancel. Copy that names the objection directly ("Cancel anytime, no phone call required") builds more trust than copy that ignores it and hopes nobody was thinking it.
Cut the words doing no work
"Really," "actually," "amazing," "incredible" almost never change whether a reader believes a claim, they just add length. Every sentence should survive the test of: does removing this word lose any meaning? If not, cut it.
The underlying principle
Generic copy happens when the writer is optimizing for sounding like an ad instead of sounding like the brand. The fix isn't a better thesaurus, it's writing from what's actually true and specific about the product, which is also, not coincidentally, the only kind of copy a competitor can't just copy and paste.